Plan the shoot better. Part of this is taking a more active role in planning the shoot. Figure out what the most proper action is for a character in a given situation. Particularly on photo-light stories. You can pull off one-character stories if they're shot well. Rudy and Whitney* did a really good job of this.
They shot multiple actions or scenes with this single character (fireman leaving Memphis due to budget cuts), which visually told the story of the act of leaving. Stepping into his uniform, driving away. Crazy shot tracking ambulance to the guy's eyes. Really nicely done.
My story was about the husband of a dispatcher who needs a heart transplant. The interview was well-shot but could have been better operated (a little shake in one of the shots and an awkward move that just needed to be smoother). All we had were two walking shots.** What else could we have had him doing? He didn't want us going by his house.
• Could we have put the GoPro in his car and grabbed a shot there?
• Was there any footage of his wife to get? She had to work a double, maybe talk to her and get shots working?
• SHOULD HAVE SHOT THE DISPATCH RADIOS AT THE DESK!!! WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT NATS AND MIGHT HAVE LET YOU USE POLICE SHOTS
This is where my input is critical. I should have had this idea when we started shooting, not now as I'm thinking about it. I can help shape the whole story by telling Jeni that I'm going to shoot that. If I tell her how I want to cut it she can probably write to that. It's an opportunity but it's also a responsibility.
Develop a plan as soon as you hear what the story is. Take ideas to the table. Talk through the plan with Jeni.
Other Notes
• If nobody's taking out the GoPro then maybe take it along on some of these shoots. Get a weird second angle. Set it up and let it go. Pro.
• This can be a weird second angle in broll but you can also try something different in the interview. Maybe it's right on someone's desk. Maybe it's on a back shelf where you see everything. Maybe it's both.
Things you did well that could be better
• Picked out a good spot for the interview. Standard bench, over the shoulder. Though you should have looked at the other side of the bench. You may have been able to get more flattering shots from there. You weren't shooting Shelly interview a rocker. But the lighting was soft and the framing was good.
• Fixed the color well. So much green in the shot otherwise. See how you can best control a white balance. Maybe take the vivid off? Skintones maybe a touch too magenta.
• Manageable EQ of the Lav. Really getting disappointed with the tone of that microphone in some situations but found a quick fix today. Maybe move it farther away from the source?
Come on
• NO NATS? REALLY?
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*I assume Whitney as I didn't see him much today.
**Shot it backwards by shooting wide-tight-chase. Should have gone tight-wide-tight.